lunes, 9 de noviembre de 2009

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Con mis amigas decidí pasar unas vacaciones inolvidables y así las preparamos. Luego de ver varias opciones nos decidimos por México.
“Eso estaría muy bien” pensamos todas, ya que reúne la posibilidad de hacer turismo durante el día y tener lugares de ocio nocturno.

Allá nos fuimos con una larga lista de recomendaciones familiares, aún cuando somos todas mayores de edad ninguna pasa los 21 años.

Desde el primer día decidimos salir a disfrutar al máximo. Nos instalamos en el hotel y dimos un paseo por la ciudad para contratar nuestra primera excursión para la mañana siguiente, “Las ruinas de Tlaxcala”. Durante esa mañana conocimos un grupo de jóvenes canadienses que nos invitaron para ir a una disco que se encontraba fuera de la ciudad. Esa misma noche, después de la ceremonia de preparación, risas y embellecimiento fuimos al encuentro de nuestros nuevos amigos en un bar céntrico y de ahí nos trasladamos a la disco, que se encontraba a media hora de coche del centro de la ciudad.

Ahí nos reunimos con otro grupo de jóvenes aparentemente todos conocidos de Johnny. No tardaron en llegar las primeras copas, yo en la disco sólo bebo agua. Allí estábamos disfrutando de bailar cuando Yurena, la hermana de una de mis amigas, se empezó a sentir mal, yo seguí bailando con Johnny mientras todo el grupo se alejó hacia unos asientos donde sentaron a Yurena tratando que se recuperara de su malestar. Pocos minutos después fui yo quien se agarró con fuerza del brazo de mi acompañante para no caerme debido a un fuerte mareo. Éste amablemente me ayudó a llegar hasta un sillón a un lado de la pista de baile. En cuanto apoyé la cabeza y cerré los ojos estaba en otro sitio, exactamente en la biblioteca de la universidad. Me sentí mareada, no entendía qué hacia ahí.

Fue la voz de Johnny invitándome a salir a tomar aire fuera la que me trajo a la realidad. Acepté su invitación y me deje llevar, en ese momento mi voluntad era cero. Empezamos a andar por la disco hacia la salida cuando me vi nuevamente dentro de la biblioteca esta vez caminando en círculos y de pronto caminaba por unos pasillos oscuros y estrechos donde había cajones con botellas vacías apilados sobre una de las paredes y vuelta a la biblioteca. El aire fresco y el sonido de la puerta lateral de una furgoneta me trajeron a la realidad, vi a Johnny invitándome a subir al vehículo y así lo hice. Al apoyar la cabeza en el asiento ya estaba nuevamente en la biblioteca, pero esta vez delante de mí había un gran pez de colores fosforescentes, flotaba o nadaba en el aire, no sé como decirlo, en realidad volaba haciendo los mismos movimientos que haría en el agua pero desplazándose en el aire. Giró varias veces a mí alrededor, y dio una vuelta violenta pegando en mi cara con su cola, y otra vez y una tercera vez aún más fuerte que me llevó a abrir los ojos.

Delante de mí varios hombres me indicaron que saliera de la furgoneta y me llevaron a una habitación dentro de una casa, no pude ver a Johnny ni preguntar qué era lo que estaba pasando. Me acostaron en una cama grande y volví a mi pez. Este se movía con gran rapidez y ahora la biblioteca ya no se parecía a la universitaria. Con un coletazo bajó uno de los libros y del mismo modo lo abrió por la mitad. Entendí que quería que lo mirara y al acercarme pude ver escrito en letras rojas bien grandes la palabra “Danger” cogí el libro y di vuelta a sus páginas, en todas decía lo mismo, Danger, Danger, Danger, Danger. El pez se acercó y me dio dos fuertes golpes con su cola en la cara, abrí los ojos y un señor me ofrecía una barra de chocolate y café. Me ayudó a tomar la infusión y pensando que necesitaba recuperarme, poco a poco tragué la barra de chocolate como pude.

Escuchaba voces de hombres discutiendo por dinero en otra sala y me preguntaba dónde estaba, ¿dónde están mis amigas? ¿Johnny? El hombre del café salió y regresó trayendo un vaso con agua que bebí ansiosa, sentía mucha sed.
Inmediatamente estaba nuevamente en la biblioteca con mi pez volador, éste no paraba de sacar libros de los estantes y abrirlos por páginas que sólo decían “Danger”.

Mientras mi mente seguía inmersa en la biblioteca sentía manos que acariciaban mi cuerpo a la vez que me despojaban de mi ropa. Sentí el peso de un cuerpo sobre mí metido entre mis piernas, pero nada podía hacer yo para evitarlo. Luego otro y otro, sólo cambiaban los olores, a veces a tabaco a whisky o a tequila mientras las manos no paraban de tocarme.

Dos coletazos violentos me llevan a abrir los ojos, nuevamente el señor del café frente a mí. Ahí estaba yo, sobre la cama tapada con una manta y al mirar debajo me vi desnuda y con hilos de sangre sobre mis piernas, comencé a gritar con desesperación. Al instante entraron dos hombres que me golpearon y me amenazaron hasta que me callé. Otro café, otra barra de chocolate y otro vaso de agua que esta vez me obligaron a tomar y de nuevo inmersa en la biblioteca con ese pez mientras mi cuerpo soportaba pesos que iban cambiando y sentía las manos que no paraba de hurgar en él.

Ahora estoy sentada en una gasolinera de la carretera esperando que venga la policía por mí. Según la fecha que me ha dicho la señora de la tienda, creo entender que han pasado diez días desde la noche de la disco. En la gasolinera dicen que llegué así, como estoy, desnuda, tapada con una manta, golpeada y ensangrentada. Yo no doy crédito a todo esto, no sé donde estuve ni qué pasó.
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LA ZARZAMORA dijo...

Esos viajes hay que haberlos vivido para contarlos.
Tú los cuentas díscolicamente bien, y rebien.

Un lindo relato, Angel.
Ya me paso por lo de Luna y Taba ré

Bs

Te eché de menos ;)

LA ZARZAMORA dijo...

discólicamente... ando mal con las tildes:=)))

María dijo...

Hola, Angel:

Me alegro mucho que continúes publicando, pero ésta vez vengo a saludarte, porque ya se me ha hecho algo tarde y el post, como es algo largo, merece leerlo con tranquilidad, para lo cual, mañana lo haré.

Un beso.

Zayi Hernández dijo...

un beso Angel.

lástima que la dejaron viva...ahora le toca vivir con eso para siempre.

TORO SALVAJE dijo...

Ufffffffff
Tremendo.
Que fuerte.
Lo peor es que posiblemente haya sucedido de forma parecida.

Saludos.

María dijo...

Seguramente esa huella siempre quedará marcada para toda su vida, es terrible y dramático lo que puede llegar a suceder en un simple viaje.

Un beso.

Lunática dijo...

¡Menudo "trip" tuvo tu protagonista! Buena idea la de meter este pez, que teníamos como reto en una alucinación, que probablemente como dejas entrever ("sólo tomo agua en la disco"), ha causado una droga de diseño.
Respecto al texto (dado que ésta es nuestra labor al hacerlo en conjunto), hay muchas frases que no me encajan y que ya conoces por post anteriores; algún acento rebelde; alguna parte menos creíble desde mi punto de vista;(por ej, que estando "ida en ese otro mundo", sintiera como la acariciaban y que sintiera un peso sobre ella).
Los coletazos del pez a modo de bofetadas que la llevan de una realidad a otra, me han gustado. Al final le daría otra vuelta.
Bss

R. Alzala dijo...

Por eso no bebo agua ;)
Directo, sin titubeos.
El recurso de jugar en dos planos dota de profundidad el texto.
El resto del análisis lo dejo a Lunática, poseedora de buen ojo para tal menester ;)

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